Personal Statement

How to Write a Graduate School Admission Essay
What do a surgeon, a lawyer and a professor have in common? They all had to write a personal statement, or essay, for their graduate school application. The graduate school essay can be incredibly stressful, so check out these tips to be prepared and to make it more manageable.

Talk to people who are in your prospective program: Connect with university alumni and your Alpha Phi network. They can give you writing samples and advice regarding your essay’s content, and they can put you in contact with professors who teach at your dream school and might even edit your essay. The possibilities are endless.

You’re smart, so show it:
Write about that research paper you were so proud of, or discuss what you learned in the lab where you practically slept while running all those experiments. Describe your mentors and how they influenced your academic career. Talk about the moment you knew that you had to go to graduate school. Don’t be shy about discussing your academic achievements. You are trying to convince a graduate program that your intellect would be beneficial to their program.

Add some spice to your essay: By adding colorful details, you will maintain your reader’s interest. Feel free to incorporate your ethnic, religious or cultural background. This will allow the admissions committee to fully understand your individuality or any obstacles you have encountered and surmounted. In addition, tie in your other passions and hobbies with your motivations for attending graduate school. For example, incorporate your lifelong dream of becoming a batboy for a baseball team into the reasons why you want to study gender inequity within religious institutions. If you decide to take this route, make sure that all details relate back to your thesis.

Edit, Edit, Edit: The graduate admissions process has no room for typos. Ask your professors, your friend who corrects your grammar, your parents and anyone else you trust to read over your essay. One general editing tip: Remove any details that are superfluous to your argument. At times, graduate school essays can have too much information, and admissions committee members gloss over them. Try to find a balance between academics and your personality. And yes, sorry to say, but each school should have a personalized essay. Your reasons for attending University X will vary from your reasons for attending University Y; let your essay reflect that.

Above all, do not underestimate your academic prowess! Be confident about your abilities. If you are excited by the prospect of pursuing a subject that interests you, it will show in your essay. Have fun with this process, plan ahead and give yourself plenty of time to review your essay. Good luck!


This article is courtesy of the “Collegiate Perspectives” blog by Devin Denny